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Thursday 14 July 2016

Activity 13

Title:Eddie the Eagle

What happen:there is a boy that wanted to be in the Olympic but his parents said he could not make it but he tried and tried but e failed.

1 comment:

  1. Hey Angela

    You have summarized the parts in a limited amount of words which is great it's short and simple which makes the audience more awake instead of reading a long summary. I think maybe you could add the video link to the trailer because the audience can watch the trailer so they know what your talking about.

    But Keep up the great work Angela
    By Mia- LS2

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