Title:Entertaining the crowd
- New Zealand Team Uniform – London Olympics 2012
- Ranking: i give this a 2 out of 3 because the boys look great but the girls were wearing dress
1.New Zealand Team Uniform – Beijing Olympics 200
2.Ranking:I give this a 1 out of 3 because that the green did not match the white.
- New Zealand Olympic Team Uniform – Athens Olympics 2004
- Ranking:I give this a 1 out of 1 because the lady in the front was wearing a big dress it looked like it was made out of cardboard .
Hi Angela
ReplyDeleteI agree with your ratings of the uniforms and how you labeled it. To give more evidence you can add images so they know what your talking about. But keep on blogging you will really get there.
Amazing Job
By Mia- LS2
Hi Angela,
ReplyDeleteCan I please confirm that you would rate the NZ Olympic uniforms in the following order:
1. 2008 uniform
2. 2012 uniform
3. 2004 uniform
For rating or ranking activities I would highly recommend using a list. It is a really clear way to show the readers what you are thinking without having to include too many words :)
I would also second Mia's suggestion of using pictures. That can be another really helpful way of showing us what you are thinking!
Keep up the great work, Angela. I hope that these suggestions are useful for you!
Cheers, Rachel :)