LI:Edit to add effect in a narrative text.Today for writing Mr oglive set us up in to group's what we had to do was he will pick what word that we go to and find the deftion and a exspalme i was with miki the words where metaphor,idiom,hyperbole,alliteration and personification me and miki's word was alliteration then after that we had to present what we wrote to the group once every one in the group present he gave us a must do.Our must do was going back to our poetry that we did in week 5 and copy the last pit of the poetry and then put it on a slide and then paste it on four time and delete
the three green parts and then put some words that have simile and metaphor.
Hi Angela,
ReplyDeleteIt's great to see you improving on your blurb for your blogpost, but there are still a few mistakes. I like how you have pointed to what metaphor and simile you have used in your presentation. In your blurb you have a few spelling mistakes. Make sure you check them before posting. Also make sure you use a capital I when you are talking about yourself. But anyways, you've done a great job with your blogpost. Keep it up!
Angari