Summer Holiday Recount

Remembering our Summer Hoilday

LI:Writing a recount

I heard the waves splashing like a roaring tiger

I heard People shouting like they were drowning

I saw big buildings that were big as an elephant

I felt the thick salty water crashing on me

I felt so tired and slow because i was like a turtle because i was charsing my friend

I wonder if most people snore in their hotel room

I wonderd if we would ever have to come back.

I learnt how to write a recount.What i had to do was write a recount about my Holiday.I had to use words and sense.To help me i ues 7 sentences.I also had to ues Smile,Metaphor,alliteration, personification, and assonance.

recount.

There was an unusual school. The school name was called mandy hill high school .  There were three kids named  Lucy, Casey and Lisa. They were best friends. one day all of the best friends came to school. They were on their phones. The principal of the school was named Max. He saw the girls on their phones. He then took their  phones and locked them up in the basement. Then the girls found a place. They took all the web’s and then it was an elevator then  casey  pressed  the number two then it went up the door open.

Then they went inside and they  saw the mighty kids that use to come to the school. The clothes were just there then lucy wanted to wear them but Casey said it was a bad idea then lisa said to just use lucy idea. Lucy was happy. The clothes came it was coming forward  then they went but they had to use the elevator the door open  then they started to fight  to get back their phones. It was hard they  were  tried then while they called max was fighting there was a smell it wanted max to go to the to get the most wanted the most coolest and the most powerful the powerful vested cota  there was just one

Problem the vested could turn the kids in to max slave and the girl’s  did not want that to happen.Then lucy had to fly but

Then they made a deal with max because they saw the kids work and they  max made the kids so they wanted lucy to fight max casiy and lisa were sacred  they could go and  that lucy might get hurt she tried and tried but she  could not she was hurt a lot in the eye,head,leg,arms,neck and back she was hurt

Then casey and lisa  went and they took all the gear of max and then he was a man the kids were not slaves they were kids and then the girls went to the kids  room and changed then they went home and ate pizza  the girls  went home.

There was an unusual school. The school name was called mandy hill high school .  There were three kids named  Lucy, Casey and Lisa. They were best friends. one day all of the best friends came to school. They were on their phones. The principal of the school was named Max. He saw the girls on their phones. He then took their  phones and locked them up in the basement. Then the girls found a place. They took all the web’s and then it was an elevator then  casey  pressed  the number two then it went up the door open.

Then they went inside and they  saw the mighty kids that use to come to the school. The clothes were just there then lucy wanted to wear them but Casey said it was a bad idea then lisa said to just use lucy idea. Lucy was happy. The clothes came it was coming forward  then they went but they had to use the elevator the door open  then they started to fight  to get back their phones. It was hard they  were  tried then while they called max was fighting there was a smell it wanted max to go to the to get the most wanted the most coolest and the most powerful the powerful vested cota  there was just one

Problem the vested could turn the kids in to max slave and the girl’s  did not want that to happen.Then lucy had to fly but

Then they made a deal with max because they saw the kids work and they  max made the kids so they wanted lucy to fight max casiy and lisa were sacred  they could go and  that lucy might get hurt she tried and tried but she  could not she was hurt a lot in the eye,head,leg,arms,neck and back she was hurt

Then casey and lisa  went and they took all the gear of max and then he was a man the kids were not slaves they were kids and then the girls went to the kids  room and changed then they went home and ate pizza  the girls  went home.

MY RECOUNT.

Once upon a time a girl named Jane had a dragon.She

had to train him  but then  the dragon bumped into a wall made out of rock. The king was taking a nap. He had a servant. He had to look for trouble . The servant had to find

a man to fix the wall that was broken the  man's name was Gunta he fix the wall and then Jane took her dragon to the forest to train him.After that  Jane took him back to the

Cattles no one want to see Jane anymore so then she had lie she went to her friend who loved gardening so then she said we have a lot of flowers more  than this one after all of the day they had a party for Jane for jane Last day at the Cattle she had to go everyone said goodbye she

had to go and her dragon said come to my cave.Then when it was morning time she said I am sorry for lying

to you but why said her friend case no one like her dragon so they said we do  but you can come and join us with our

party today so he did.Then the two girls came hiding at the bush and then they throw the tomato at the king then the king woke and he said “what is going on Jane we are having a party” come said Jester yes said Smithy said yes then Cuthbert said can we have tomatoes she said well……. OK it is on the shelf ya ya ya Preps said let's make a  plan so then the two girls got all the tomato and thrower them Jane said come on join in they said yes ya ya ya ya  then it was a long Day they had to  get some sleep for the day.Then when the sun was up no one woke up as then Jane said where is my family WE ARE HERE!!!!!!!!!!!!! as they had to wake the others to have a nice breakfast that the girl made.THE  END.