This week for Mr olivge group we had to write a Procedural text on how to fly and make a plane our learning intention was LI:To write a procedural text.I think the explaining was hard and what i could improve is by make my line more detail and i think i did good.
Kia orana Angela I like your work on Procedural Planning it is great I like it keep it up with the good work and hope you can do it more better you just need to work on some of the steps inside the Procedural planning because some of them need to be longer but still keep it up with the great learning.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Angela, some good instruction based off my video. You have attempted to use a variety of verbs to help the reader, well done. Have you tried giving these to someone to follow, to see if they can?
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