Narrtive Checking

I learnt how to comment on google docs.I learnt it by doing this task.What we had to do was pick a partner and read there narrtive. Then we had to comment what we or them need to fix.We had to comment on the Jack and Jill i worked with Mele and Alice.Mele's narrative was about the Creepy Monster takes over Halloween.I like her story because it made sense and Her story had a great hook.