Lost with Magic

Lost with Magic

Once there was a boy named Bob, he was very young .

He once found a time machine it was small. All he had to do is

press the number of the year and then press enter and he would travel to that year.

He was in a land where there was no gravity.  The chairs were

floating, he was curious of what had made this happen.

Something he didn't know  was that a monster lived here.

When he fell he broke the time machine so he was lost.

He quickly found a way to get out because he need to get to the

magic show in time to perform.

Although for he was sacred of what the monster might do to him.

He went to get some batteries to fix it but with one step the monster

came out with a very cross face because he did not like humans.

After while Bob tried to calm the monster down when he was clam

the monster help him to get back once Bob was back he rushed to the

Magic show and saved the machine to do a trick.

The trick was to go in a box and

pretend that he would despair but he use the time machine to help him despair.

What I did was I wrote a story.In my group one person had to time the first was

5 minutes in the 5 minutes

we have to write in the 7 minutes we talked and in the 10 minute we fixed up any

mistakes.After we did this we went to the mat to discuss our ideas with the group.

we also highlight our simple,

Compound and Complex sentence.